The biggest issue is your font sizes. It looks like you've gone - the phone number is pretty important (I'll make that a font big), and the menu is quite important too (so I'll make that big), and the header (big), and the sub heading (also important so big) and so on. But as everything is big and the same font there is no obvious hierarchy so your eye doesn't automatically focus on where you want it to go.
In the header I would shrink the sub-heading and the menu so they were the same size as the body copy. You might need to do something to the menu to make it more obviously a menu - perhaps a slightly different background colour, a line under each link... something like that - but not size! You could also consider using a different font differentiate between header and copy or sub header - again it says this is different but not more important.
In the main text, the h2 colour/size on 'clean' is best.
The white transparent background needs to be less see-through, the background makes it hard to read at the moment - it's too distracting and with the dark photo it means not enough contrast between the grey back ground and darker grey text.
I like the general layout of the sections though - clean and simple, but it looks like you have a good range of presentation options.